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Offline Ghandi

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NEED INPUT
« on: Sunday, March 14, 2010, 10:09:13 PM »
I've been working on a drawing for awhile now and I just can't finish it. Something is missing. I need some input (honest input, don't just tell me that it is good). What is missing? What can I do to improve it? Feel free to download it and add what you feel is necessary if you wish.

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I'm going to give this to a girl so please I need to make it the best that it can be.

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Re: NEED INPUT
« Reply #1 on: Sunday, March 14, 2010, 10:28:03 PM »
It needs a guy standing out front, shouting obscenities.

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Re: NEED INPUT
« Reply #2 on: Sunday, March 14, 2010, 10:36:17 PM »
Excellent, thank you. Masterpiece 2.0

But it is still missing something...

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Re: NEED INPUT
« Reply #3 on: Sunday, March 14, 2010, 11:43:18 PM »
It needs a money hitting MyD with a linearity stick.

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Re: NEED INPUT
« Reply #4 on: Monday, March 15, 2010, 12:03:29 AM »
It needs a money hitting MyD with a linearity stick.

3.0

Better, but not there yet.

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Re: NEED INPUT
« Reply #5 on: Monday, March 15, 2010, 02:15:10 AM »
hahah I meant to write monkey...

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Re: NEED INPUT
« Reply #6 on: Monday, March 15, 2010, 07:29:21 AM »
haha, I think the money was the way to go, truly.

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Re: NEED INPUT
« Reply #7 on: Monday, March 15, 2010, 08:14:36 PM »
I think you need a couple of flowers in the grass over there. And maybe a bear or a shark. Or better yet, a sea bear, or a grizzly shark.
No! I don't want a f**king guide!

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Re: NEED INPUT
« Reply #8 on: Monday, March 15, 2010, 10:23:16 PM »
Good ideas, but still needs work.

4.0

Edit: My bear-shark makes me happy
« Last Edit: Monday, March 15, 2010, 10:47:45 PM by Ghandi »

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Re: NEED INPUT
« Reply #9 on: Monday, March 15, 2010, 10:59:56 PM »
hehhe that bear shark looks awesome

edit:

I meant it.

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Re: NEED INPUT
« Reply #10 on: Monday, March 15, 2010, 11:37:57 PM »
Haha, bear-shark!  Idol, t-shirt designs, pronto!

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Re: NEED INPUT
« Reply #11 on: Monday, March 15, 2010, 11:53:21 PM »
Needs more spikes.

And hookers.

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Re: NEED INPUT
« Reply #12 on: Tuesday, March 16, 2010, 05:42:02 AM »
Haha this is classic!

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Re: NEED INPUT
« Reply #13 on: Tuesday, March 16, 2010, 06:16:23 PM »
Needs more spikes.

And hookers.

Version 5.0. The spikes will have to be incorporated later.

Still needs work....

And sorry Pyro, you just happen to be the only hooker that I know.

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Re: NEED INPUT
« Reply #14 on: Tuesday, March 16, 2010, 06:33:08 PM »
Damn, I just googled "bearshark" and I have been beaten to the photoshop punch.

I think the house needs to be more exciting, and there needs to be more wildlife. Perhaps a family of beavers lives there. And one wears a top hat.

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Re: NEED INPUT
« Reply #15 on: Tuesday, March 16, 2010, 06:37:16 PM »
Needs some asians
Suck it, Pugnate.

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Re: NEED INPUT
« Reply #16 on: Tuesday, March 16, 2010, 06:55:34 PM »
6.0

Added gun turrets on the house and a "GTFO" welcome mat to spice things up, along with your other requests.

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Re: NEED INPUT
« Reply #17 on: Tuesday, March 16, 2010, 07:40:14 PM »
Haha, we really need to start a fucking OWnet thread hall of fame, man.

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Re: NEED INPUT
« Reply #18 on: Tuesday, March 16, 2010, 09:30:08 PM »
the crop of asians look like aliens lol
Suck it, Pugnate.

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Re: NEED INPUT
« Reply #19 on: Tuesday, March 16, 2010, 09:41:38 PM »
hahaha they do look like aliens from South Park.

Maybe Ghandi is trying to say something.


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Re: NEED INPUT
« Reply #20 on: Tuesday, March 16, 2010, 09:52:27 PM »
OK I'd like to see Schrödinger's Cat jumping on Wind&Confusion's head, as he is trying to direct a group of Asian slaves into painting the Sistine Chapel's artwork on to Gabe Newell's corpse.

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Re: NEED INPUT
« Reply #21 on: Wednesday, March 17, 2010, 12:23:54 AM »
I guess I'll play my archetype. Something needs to be on fire.

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Re: NEED INPUT
« Reply #22 on: Wednesday, March 17, 2010, 11:42:56 AM »
the crop of asians look like aliens lol

ITS YOUR CROP, LEARN 2 GROW

Version 7.0

The new addition represents both suggestions from Pug and Pyro.

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Re: NEED INPUT
« Reply #23 on: Friday, March 19, 2010, 06:23:20 PM »
Ahaha.


You just reminded me of the Deviant Art account I created to promote "notebook simplistic" art.  You know, before I promptly forgot about it. 


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Re: NEED INPUT
« Reply #24 on: Friday, March 19, 2010, 09:35:03 PM »
Haha, damn, I remember that.  That was beautiful.

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