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Community => Art => Topic started by: Ghandi on Sunday, March 14, 2010, 10:09:13 PM
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I've been working on a drawing for awhile now and I just can't finish it. Something is missing. I need some input (honest input, don't just tell me that it is good). What is missing? What can I do to improve it? Feel free to download it and add what you feel is necessary if you wish.
Link (http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m310/Borgs_2006/MASTERPIECE.jpg)
I'm going to give this to a girl so please I need to make it the best that it can be.
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It needs a guy standing out front, shouting obscenities.
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Excellent, thank you. Masterpiece 2.0 (http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m310/Borgs_2006/MASTERPIECE20.jpg)
But it is still missing something...
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It needs a money hitting MyD with a linearity stick.
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It needs a money hitting MyD with a linearity stick.
3.0 (http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m310/Borgs_2006/MASTERPIECE30.jpg)
Better, but not there yet.
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hahah I meant to write monkey...
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haha, I think the money was the way to go, truly.
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I think you need a couple of flowers in the grass over there. And maybe a bear or a shark. Or better yet, a sea bear, or a grizzly shark.
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Good ideas, but still needs work.
4.0 (http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m310/Borgs_2006/MASTERPIECE40.jpg)
Edit: My bear-shark makes me happy
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hehhe that bear shark looks awesome
edit:
I meant it.
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Haha, bear-shark! Idol, t-shirt designs, pronto!
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Needs more spikes.
And hookers.
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Haha this is classic!
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Needs more spikes.
And hookers.
Version 5.0 (http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m310/Borgs_2006/MASTERPIECE50.jpg). The spikes will have to be incorporated later.
Still needs work....
And sorry Pyro, you just happen to be the only hooker that I know.
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Damn, I just googled "bearshark" and I have been beaten to the photoshop punch.
I think the house needs to be more exciting, and there needs to be more wildlife. Perhaps a family of beavers lives there. And one wears a top hat.
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Needs some asians
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6.0 (http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m310/Borgs_2006/MASTERPIECE60.jpg)
Added gun turrets on the house and a "GTFO" welcome mat to spice things up, along with your other requests.
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Haha, we really need to start a fucking OWnet thread hall of fame, man.
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the crop of asians look like aliens lol
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hahaha they do look like aliens from South Park.
Maybe Ghandi is trying to say something.
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OK I'd like to see Schrödinger's Cat jumping on Wind&Confusion's head, as he is trying to direct a group of Asian slaves into painting the Sistine Chapel's artwork on to Gabe Newell's corpse.
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I guess I'll play my archetype. Something needs to be on fire.
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the crop of asians look like aliens lol
ITS YOUR CROP, LEARN 2 GROW
Version 7.0 (http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m310/Borgs_2006/MASTERPIECE70-1.jpg)
The new addition represents both suggestions from Pug and Pyro.
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Ahaha.
You just reminded me of the Deviant Art account I created to promote "notebook simplistic" art. You know, before I promptly forgot about it.
(http://fc01.deviantart.net/images/i/2003/46/9/4/Giant__s_Sorrow_on_Titanic.jpg)
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Haha, damn, I remember that. That was beautiful.