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Community => Art => Topic started by: MysterD on Sunday, February 25, 2007, 04:24:28 PM
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I'm gonna update this first piece of this thread, from now on, when I add new poems and stuff.
MysterD's Main DeviantArt Page Link
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Here's the URL for my DeviantArt, for my poetry and whatnot...if you all wanna' take a look-see at some MyD Poetry (http://mysterd.deviantart.com/)
Feb 4, 2008 Post *NEW!*
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The Escape Artist's Failure (http://mysterd.deviantart.com/art/The-Escape-Artist-The-Failure-76512494)
June 22th, 2007 Post
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The Radiation I've Been Facing (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/58197507/)
June 18th, 2007 Post
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Daily Reoccurring Thoughts (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/57899595/)
The Butterfly Lives (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/57911514/)
June 11th, 2007 Post
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I Finally Dreamt Of You (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/57087935/)
May 3rd, 2007 Post
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Reign of Doom (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/54580912/?qo=3&q=by%3Amysterd&qh=sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps)
Surrounded By Darkness (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/54581264/?qo=2&q=by%3Amysterd&qh=sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps)
Quicksand of Love (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/54581815/?qo=1&q=by%3Amysterd&qh=sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps)
Beyond Repair (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/54582391/?q=by%3Amysterd&qh=sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps)
April 11th, 2007 Post
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(Ten Lines Of) Sadness (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/53385216/)
Trying To Overcome Love's Obstacles (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/53386658/)
Surreal Rain (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/53387309/)
March 2nd, 2007 Post
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The Shell And The Soul (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49999899/)
Original Post
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I just added 4 old ones, which I wrote some time back....
The Remnants Of Love (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49633727/)
Beat Of Love (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49634065/)
Inevitable Destruction (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49634278/)
Caught In A Time Loop (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49635240/)
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Before I read those, I wish to know. Are they linear or open ended?
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Before I read those, I wish to know. Are they linear or open ended?
No their very linear line after line of dialogue and none of it was voiced :P
No I did read two of them, their pretty good.
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Before I read those, I wish to know. Are they linear or open ended?
:P
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No I did read two of them, their pretty good.
Thanks, bro. :)
Much appreciated
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Just a side note: you made two consecutive posts that were exactly 25 seconds apart. We're nice here, but most places consider that spamming. C'mon, man, you should know better. It's one thing if you're updating a running thread that's been neglected a while and you've got some kind of milestone update... then if you happen to have had the last post nobody'll give you guff. But 25 seconds?
Anyway, sorry I can't give you a bit more time/critique on the poetry. I read over a bit, but I've just been super busy... don't have much time for that stuff these days. Got 200-something submissions on DA to catch up on which will never happen... arg. Anyway, all I can continue to suggest (pretty sure I suggested it last time we talked about this stuff) is that you read more poetry. It's never a bad thing, and I think you can tell a poet who doesn't read poetry from a poet who reads a lot pretty quickly. Doesn't mean the one who doesn't is *bad* necessarily, but there are things you can pick up on in their poetry which delineate areas of weakness more quickly and obviously. So yeah, sorry I can't give you much feedback, but keep writing! And read some, too (which I mention mostly because you once told me you don't, so I'm going to keep beating it into your head that you should!)!
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Just a side note: you made two consecutive posts that were exactly 25 seconds apart. We're nice here, but most places consider that spamming. C'mon, man, you should know better. It's one thing if you're updating a running thread that's been neglected a while and you've got some kind of milestone update... then if you happen to have had the last post nobody'll give you guff. But 25 seconds?
I should know better. My bad, bro.
Anyway, sorry I can't give you a bit more time/critique on the poetry. I read over a bit, but I've just been super busy... don't have much time for that stuff these days. Got 200-something submissions on DA to catch up on which will never happen... arg. Anyway, all I can continue to suggest (pretty sure I suggested it last time we talked about this stuff) is that you read more poetry. It's never a bad thing, and I think you can tell a poet who doesn't read poetry from a poet who reads a lot pretty quickly. Doesn't mean the one who doesn't is *bad* necessarily, but there are things you can pick up on in their poetry which delineate areas of weakness more quickly and obviously. So yeah, sorry I can't give you much feedback, but keep writing! And read some, too (which I mention mostly because you once told me you don't, so I'm going to keep beating it into your head that you should!)!
Thanks for the advice, bro. :)
MyD appreciates it.
And just so I don't start a new post in this thread some 25 seconds later here, new poem:
The Shell And The Soul (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49999899/)
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New MyD Poem; click below!
The Sadness Lingers (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/53016180/)
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Brand new MyD Poetry!!!
(Ten Lines Of) Sadness (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/53385216/)
Some Unreleased MyD Poetry (well, Unreleased until now....)
Trying To Overcome Love's Obstacles (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/53386658/)
Surreal Rain (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/53387309/)
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Some brand new MyD Poetry on his DA Page. (http://mysterd.deviantart.com/)
Four new ones!
Reign of Doom (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/54580912/?qo=3&q=by%3Amysterd&qh=sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps)
Surrounded By Darkness (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/54581264/?qo=2&q=by%3Amysterd&qh=sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps)
Quicksand of Love (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/54581815/?qo=1&q=by%3Amysterd&qh=sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps)
Beyond Repair (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/54582391/?q=by%3Amysterd&qh=sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps)
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Can't you just... you know, put all your poems into one thread. This is the fourth MyD poetry mania super deluxe madness thread.
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Can't you just... you know, put all your poems into one thread. This is the fourth MyD poetry mania super deluxe madness thread.
If the mods want to (since I don't have that power), they can merge them all -- if there's no problem w/ them doing that.
That'd be definitely fine w/ MyD.
I can then put it all in one super MyD deluxe thread....YEAH!!!
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If you find the links for me I'll mod 'em up when I get the chance later tonight. And yeah, the art board gets enough traffic now that we can really start trying to consolidate. I used to do a thread for each of my poems just because the art board saw no action like at all, so... now we can just keep project threads going instead. Seems to be the latest trend. So link me your other threads D and I'll merge them when I get back from Sy's.
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Here's the other 3 threads you can merge w/ this one I'm posting this reply right here in....
Thread Number 1 (http://www.overwritten.net/forum/index.php?topic=1520.0)
Thread Number 2 (http://www.overwritten.net/forum/index.php?topic=1816.0)
Thread Number 3 (http://www.overwritten.net/forum/index.php?topic=1853.0)
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Merged and merged. Let me know if I missed anything.
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Merged and merged. Let me know if I missed anything.
Thanks for everything.
You miss'd nothing, bro.
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Brand new MyD poetry -- it's worth noting, that I actually wrote this one today.
I Finally Dreamt Of You (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/57087935/)
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New MyD Poetry and all.
Daily Reoccurring Thoughts (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/57899595/)
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Recurring.
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New poetry from MyD today.
The Escape Artist's Failure (http://mysterd.deviantart.com/art/The-Escape-Artist-The-Failure-76512494)