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Title: NEED INPUT
Post by: Ghandi on Sunday, March 14, 2010, 10:09:13 PM
I've been working on a drawing for awhile now and I just can't finish it. Something is missing. I need some input (honest input, don't just tell me that it is good). What is missing? What can I do to improve it? Feel free to download it and add what you feel is necessary if you wish.

Link (http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m310/Borgs_2006/MASTERPIECE.jpg)

I'm going to give this to a girl so please I need to make it the best that it can be.
Title: Re: NEED INPUT
Post by: Quemaqua on Sunday, March 14, 2010, 10:28:03 PM
It needs a guy standing out front, shouting obscenities.
Title: Re: NEED INPUT
Post by: Ghandi on Sunday, March 14, 2010, 10:36:17 PM
Excellent, thank you. Masterpiece 2.0 (http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m310/Borgs_2006/MASTERPIECE20.jpg)

But it is still missing something...
Title: Re: NEED INPUT
Post by: Pugnate on Sunday, March 14, 2010, 11:43:18 PM
It needs a money hitting MyD with a linearity stick.
Title: Re: NEED INPUT
Post by: Ghandi on Monday, March 15, 2010, 12:03:29 AM
It needs a money hitting MyD with a linearity stick.

3.0 (http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m310/Borgs_2006/MASTERPIECE30.jpg)

Better, but not there yet.
Title: Re: NEED INPUT
Post by: Pugnate on Monday, March 15, 2010, 02:15:10 AM
hahah I meant to write monkey...
Title: Re: NEED INPUT
Post by: Quemaqua on Monday, March 15, 2010, 07:29:21 AM
haha, I think the money was the way to go, truly.
Title: Re: NEED INPUT
Post by: ScaryTooth on Monday, March 15, 2010, 08:14:36 PM
I think you need a couple of flowers in the grass over there. And maybe a bear or a shark. Or better yet, a sea bear, or a grizzly shark.
Title: Re: NEED INPUT
Post by: Ghandi on Monday, March 15, 2010, 10:23:16 PM
Good ideas, but still needs work.

4.0 (http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m310/Borgs_2006/MASTERPIECE40.jpg)

Edit: My bear-shark makes me happy
Title: Re: NEED INPUT
Post by: Pugnate on Monday, March 15, 2010, 10:59:56 PM
hehhe that bear shark looks awesome

edit:

I meant it.
Title: Re: NEED INPUT
Post by: Quemaqua on Monday, March 15, 2010, 11:37:57 PM
Haha, bear-shark!  Idol, t-shirt designs, pronto!
Title: Re: NEED INPUT
Post by: sirean_syan on Monday, March 15, 2010, 11:53:21 PM
Needs more spikes.

And hookers.
Title: Re: NEED INPUT
Post by: scottws on Tuesday, March 16, 2010, 05:42:02 AM
Haha this is classic!
Title: Re: NEED INPUT
Post by: Ghandi on Tuesday, March 16, 2010, 06:16:23 PM
Needs more spikes.

And hookers.

Version 5.0 (http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m310/Borgs_2006/MASTERPIECE50.jpg). The spikes will have to be incorporated later.

Still needs work....

And sorry Pyro, you just happen to be the only hooker that I know.
Title: Re: NEED INPUT
Post by: idolminds on Tuesday, March 16, 2010, 06:33:08 PM
Damn, I just googled "bearshark" and I have been beaten to the photoshop punch.

I think the house needs to be more exciting, and there needs to be more wildlife. Perhaps a family of beavers lives there. And one wears a top hat.
Title: Re: NEED INPUT
Post by: angrykeebler on Tuesday, March 16, 2010, 06:37:16 PM
Needs some asians
Title: Re: NEED INPUT
Post by: Ghandi on Tuesday, March 16, 2010, 06:55:34 PM
6.0 (http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m310/Borgs_2006/MASTERPIECE60.jpg)

Added gun turrets on the house and a "GTFO" welcome mat to spice things up, along with your other requests.
Title: Re: NEED INPUT
Post by: Quemaqua on Tuesday, March 16, 2010, 07:40:14 PM
Haha, we really need to start a fucking OWnet thread hall of fame, man.
Title: Re: NEED INPUT
Post by: angrykeebler on Tuesday, March 16, 2010, 09:30:08 PM
the crop of asians look like aliens lol
Title: Re: NEED INPUT
Post by: Pugnate on Tuesday, March 16, 2010, 09:41:38 PM
hahaha they do look like aliens from South Park.

Maybe Ghandi is trying to say something.

Title: Re: NEED INPUT
Post by: Pugnate on Tuesday, March 16, 2010, 09:52:27 PM
OK I'd like to see Schrödinger's Cat jumping on Wind&Confusion's head, as he is trying to direct a group of Asian slaves into painting the Sistine Chapel's artwork on to Gabe Newell's corpse.
Title: Re: NEED INPUT
Post by: PyroMenace on Wednesday, March 17, 2010, 12:23:54 AM
I guess I'll play my archetype. Something needs to be on fire.
Title: Re: NEED INPUT
Post by: Ghandi on Wednesday, March 17, 2010, 11:42:56 AM
the crop of asians look like aliens lol

ITS YOUR CROP, LEARN 2 GROW

Version 7.0 (http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m310/Borgs_2006/MASTERPIECE70-1.jpg)

The new addition represents both suggestions from Pug and Pyro.
Title: Re: NEED INPUT
Post by: gpw11 on Friday, March 19, 2010, 06:23:20 PM
Ahaha.


You just reminded me of the Deviant Art account I created to promote "notebook simplistic" art.  You know, before I promptly forgot about it. 

(http://fc01.deviantart.net/images/i/2003/46/9/4/Giant__s_Sorrow_on_Titanic.jpg)
Title: Re: NEED INPUT
Post by: Quemaqua on Friday, March 19, 2010, 09:35:03 PM
Haha, damn, I remember that.  That was beautiful.